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Hola! How's everyone? Have time to take a look? Here is my work in progress. It's just a sketch, I know she has no feet and there are no details whatsoever yet. I'll keep posting the progress as I go along. Thanks for any upcoming comments! This is one of my first tattoo-related artworks. I chose to do pin-up girl basically to make myself happy.. ho ho ^o^ For more of my artworks on this forum go here ---> http://www.tattoonow.com/facemaster.cfm?task=message_list&thread_index=11858&generate=1

Looks great so far. With the exception of cant wait to see the next stage I think of anything else to say! Ha, dont pat yourself on the back too hard, I dont draw so your getting off easy. I'd love to hear what some artists had to say... :-)

well ya tick turd.oops this isnt the bithch session ha ha lol. ok i like what ya got so far and from a 30 second glance it looks real good for a sketch. but might i add i feel the jaw line needs to be brought in closer towards the eye not much but try it shoulders and arms look cemetrical level and good shrink down the nipple just a tad the one sticking out.and last but not least the tail needs to be thinner it is out of size for her but like i said just a 30 second glance keep em coming its looking great for a preliminary sketch

the first thing i noticed (as a girl) is "hey, her nipples are actually in the right place!" ... i also noticed you need to shrink down the tail.. but for a prelim sketch, i like your grasp of form.

Thanks for all above comments, note taken ^o^ Here's the latest progress. The first add-feet progress. Notice where I joined the paper >.< Adding feet was a painnnnnn. I spent some hours just trying to get the structure. I tried to cheat by making her wear heels, but barefeet seems more sexy ( kinda backfired when the feet I drew were not so spec-tacular ) Cleaning Up After cleaning up, I realise that I don't like the tail, too bulky. Change tails *_* After changing tails and cleaning up once more, realise left leg was too long. Shorten legs. After shortening legs, realise left foot look like a piece of biscuit. Retouch left feet. After retouching feet, realise that tail looks like a piece of ribbon @_@ Add tail details. I'll line it in italic after work. And hopefully to get in some colors. Alright! Comments come!

ya got it going feet are a pain in the patooooootity to draw love tha jaw nipple and all keep going man ya got it going its looking very good

Looks good! Reminds me a little of the devil girl tattoo posted on the TazArtTwo thread last month.

I like it! Coming out nicely, although I think her left nipple is off to the right side of the boob too much.. (her left).. also I think the jawline under her ear needs to come in some as well it juts out to far.. looks a little blockheaded.. I think the tail is still a bit too fat.. Coming along nicely! Craig

upon reading th post above this one i agree move the nipple keep the tail all one size and suck up the jaw by her eye. and gabe what the hell is up with these numbers on the posting thingy

the numbers on the post thingy are to make the spam go away yippee for numbers

pretty cool...i really like it...i think the arm that is propped up is a little elongated though, and her head is a little big... sorry for nitpickin'...can't wait to see outline. i'm enjoying watching your work in progress!